Still friends?

Chapter 11

Long...... I'm guessing. :) multiple parts, I'm sure. READ IT ALL:) date day. I dunno if tris is really romantic. If you read Allegiant, remember their date (still inside the fence?) (with the erudite pop)

Okay. Confession time.

I have Still Friends on our fanfiction account. And now both stories are equal, except right now I'm posting the last chapter (this one) on fanfiction.

So, just like fanfiction, you are entitled to the million dollar question an have equal right in my OC contest. :)

THE MILLION DOLLAR QUESTION

I got divergent is Spanish! No, I'm not South American, or Mexican or live in Spain. But, the questions...

Do any of you speak a second or third language, FLUENTLY? The awesomest will be able to submit an OC for this story!

Comment!!!!!!

-Iris

Tris's POV

Sunday I wake up early, and I groggily sit up, and Caleb orders me to make breakfast, and I practically skip down the stairs, almost missing five steps and just barely avoiding face planting at the landing. I collide with the fridge when I enter the kitchen.

"Beatrice!" Caleb peers around the corner, and looks horrified, either that I almost cracked my head open, or the fact that I'm still smiling like an idiot.

"Hey Caleb!" I grin like a maniac, and proceed to cranking eggs over a bowl, and whisking merrily. He looks at me strangely, but doesn't say anything as he turns back to cutting strawberries.

Why? It's the day Tobias is going with me on a date.

Today I am overjoyed, and with some weird looks from Caleb, I whip up eggs with ham, salt, pepper, onions and garlic, toast and jelly and even coffee for dad.

My family doesn't regard this strangely.

"This is lovely, Beatrice." My father says graciously. After my meal, I go upstairs. Tobias said he would pick me up at 5:00 and it's 9:45, so Christina will come around 2:00 to dress me up. I lay on my bed to chill, but my peace is short lived, because my phone rings. The contact flashes as MAR ;D 3. I roll my eyes and pick it up.

"Hi Marlene!" I say to the phone, and lay it on my bed.

"Hey Tris." Her voice is slightly muffled. "I-I'm on with Christina on a connection." Her voice shakes.

"What's wrong?" I scoop the phone up, pressing it to my ear.

"Uriah, he broke up with me!" Marlene's voice ends an octave higher, but she steels it afterI feel so bad. Here I am all happy, and Marlene just got in a break up.

"URIAH!" Christina's voice is an amplified boom box, and I push the receiver about a foot away from my ear. "I SWEAR THAT LITTLE-"

"Christina!" I cut in sharply, ending her holler. My voice softens, and I press the phone back on my ear. "Marlene it's going to be okay, why did he break up?"

"He said a bunch if stuff I lost, but," Marlene says, surprisingly normal.

"But why?" Christina inquires.

I can almost feel Marlene's eyes pierce me though the phone as she delivers the next words. "He broke up with me because he likes Tris."

My phone slips out of my sweaty palms and onto the carpet.

"Tris?" Christina's voice comes muffled upside down from the floor. "Tris!"

I pick up my phone. "I'm here." I manage. "Mar, I don't like him that way."