A Hinny love story

Chapter 1-The Proposal

"Ginny, I'm home! "Harry said as he got back from work at the ministry
"Oh hi Harry, how was work?"Ginny asked her boyfriend.
"Tough, 9 other aurors and I caught the rest of the death eaters and put most of them in Azkaban. Kingsley is doing something with a couple of the leaders but he won't tell us what."
"Oh sounds difficult, where were they?"
"We found them in the shrieking shack after a while of looking. By the way, do you wanna go to Fancy's tonight for dinner?"
"That place is so expensive though"
"It's okay, I'll pay"
"Okay fine"
"Let's go get ready now"
"Okay"

~at Fancy's~
"Hello, I'm Mark. I'll be your waiter for tonight. can I get your drink orders please?" Mark said
"I'll have a butterbeer please" Harry said.
"I'll have a pumpkin juice please" Ginny replied.
"Okay I'll be right back with your drinks" Mark said leaving.
"So Ginny, how's the Holy Head Harpies going?"
"They're letting us on a Christmas break soon which is good!"
"Yeah that is good Gin"
"They're letting us get off the 23-2 of January"
"Oh that's good, sadly it's only the 5th"
"Okay, are you ready to order? "Mark interrupted putting the drinks on the table.
"Yes, I'd like the spaghetti and meatballs and the garlic bread" Harry said.
"Make that two please" said Ginny.
"Okay coming right up!"

~ 30 minutes later~

"Your food is here" Mark said, setting down the plates of food.
"Thanks, it looks so delicious" Ginny said smiling.
"Yeah, it smells great too"Harry replied.
Then they ate.
~35 minutes later~
"Okay, are you done Ginny?" Harry asked finishing his plate.
"Yep" Ginny said, taking her last bite of spaghetti.
"Okay, do you wanna go for a walk in the park now?"
"Sure, I'd love that Harry."
"Okay, let's go."
Then they payed and got in the muggle car they bought in case they wanted to drive around, and Harry drove to the Nature Trail Park. When they got there, Harry grabbed her hand and led her through an opening between two trees with other trees around it making a circle, different colored flowers, and a heart made of red rose petals. Harry led her to the heart in the middle and got down on one knee. He said, "Ginevra Molly Weasley, when I first saw you, I knew you were the most beautiful girl I have ever seen. When I saved you from the chamber, I knew I really liked you. Then after talking to you in my 6th year I realized that I loved you. I had to break up with you for your safety, then you forgave me; and I really thank you for that. We started dating again, and now here I am. So, Ginevra Molly Weasley, will you make me the happiest man on earth and marry me?"

So that was the first chapter and I hope you liked it! Please vote and tell me how to improve it, cause I'm kinda new at this whole "writing thing"