Hyrule by @littie_26
DESCRIPTION
Catalina is not like a normal teenage girl. She can see things that other poeple can't see. When she finds out that her mother isn't her biological mother and that she isn't from here, her world turns upside down.
Will she find out who she really is and where she's from?
Other details:-
Incomplete
4 parts
Fantasy
Possibly mature in the future?
Review
6 /10
This is a very interesting story idea and it has so much potential!
I understand English is not your first language, and we do see that as readers. It could be a good idea to look for someone to check over your chapters before publishing to make them as good as possible.
The story could do with a little development, but I am limited in what I could review as there were so few chapters.
Keep writing, you have a lot of potential and with time your writing will improve. I think this story has a bright future, dont stop!!
Reviewed on 1st January 2017
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