The Lonely God|| Golden Trio Era by AnnualDayne
DESCRIPTION:-
{OC x Various}
"Never play a man for the short con when you can play him for the long one."
As early as Booker can recall she has lived a life shrouded in mystery. Her legal guardians, The Dursleys, had never shyed away from bluntly informing her that her parents were dead and gone but how? The answer is never fully explained.
Yet soon herself and Harry are whisked away to a world of magic and after being sorted into gryffindor both are plunged into adventure along with Ron and Hermione.
Nevertheless secrets are still barricaded behind stone walls and Booker despite her efforts cannot seem to find even a crack of truth. From the tattoo on her wrist to her very own surname, could it all just be lies?
Other details:-
Fanfiction
14 parts
Ongoing
Review:-
Rating:- 8/10
First of all, I really like the chapter where you have quotes each character and shown us who they are. It's Harry Potter related, that's always a great start! ;)
There are a couple of spelling errors so just check through. If possible, please make time switches more obvious as it got a little confusing in some earlier chapters. There are also a few bits which could be paced a bit better.
I'm not sure if this is a bad thing, but it is veryy similar to the original story, especially at first, so just be careful. Fanfics for stories and films aren't usually something I'd read so I am really sorry if theyre meant to be like that and I misunderstood!
I have a few suggestions for you to make this story as amazing as possible, cus honestly I'm in love with the idea. If you're interested, message me and I'll tell you.
Your writing style is great and it captures your attention from the beginning and you can't put it down. It's great for Harry Potter fans who are looking for another view. It's a story with a lot of potential, keep writing!!
Well done and keep writing! And UPDATE, that last chapter has me on edge!
Added on 11th Feb 2017
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