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Charmed or Possession by @AuriannaElle

Charmed or Possession by AuriannaElle

DESCRIPTION

Tell us, this anger you are feeling, it is driven by the feeling of hurt and betrayal, no? Do you not want it to go away? All of it?

"Of course I do. I want nothing more--"

Then you know what you have to do.

"No, I won't do it. My body is my own. You will not share it. You will not harm him. I won't let you!" I shouted angrily into the cold air.

You still care about him even though he is causing you this grief? You still want him, don't you?

Fine, we won't hurt him. We shall make him bend to your will. You would like that, wouldn't you?

"What do you mean? You can't force someone to feel something for you if he doesn't."

- • - • - • -

Svenna's past and the fates of women in her family have changed her thoughts about love and finding her soulmate. Abandoning her hopeless romantic ideals, she adopts a more realistic view that seemed jaded for her youth, surrounding her heart with thick walls, which endowed her with a steely exterior. Her strong and "challenging" traits make securing lasting relationships tough, and she refuses to settle for something(one) less than what she wants. But when she meets familiar faces - one is a complete stranger, the other is her first love - she wonders why both want her and she finds her innermost desires, long repressed, now reawakened.

Svenna found this nonsensical. Her argument? These things simply do not happen to her but she does not know that she had unwittingly revived a divine-like force. An entity forged in a gem decades ago with its own intentions, paves a new path that intertwines the lives of two women from different generations. Is the entity accountable for the changes in her life? What about the odd change in her disposition?

When she realises what is happening to her, will she welcome the interference, at the expense of her self?

Or will she renounce love to save her self?

Details:-

Incomplete

12 parts

Romance

Mature

Review:-

Rating:-9 /10

First of all, really good intro/description, it's encapturing and builds up interest to draw readers in.

Wow, this is incredibly well written, from an analytical point of view this is incredible as it uses various literary devices that make the description and story so vivid for the reader which I think is important in the development of characters and plot.

Just from the first chapter you have set a tone of mystery of suspense which is important in gaining a reader's attention and maintaining it and I think you have done an incredible job of that.  Good use of cliffhangers for this too.

A small tip is to just be careful with some words, as they are hard to understand for some people, maybe use a glossary or put the meaning into brackets to make this easier for those who do not understand?  If this were a real book, of course this would not happen, but to make it easier for wattpad and to keep a reader involved, a small way of letting the reader know the meaning will help as some may choose to give it up due to lack of understanding.  However, I am incredibly impressed by the language chosen and by all means do not stop using it, just make a way for readers to understand.

It is an incredible story, absolutely in amazement of your writing skills.  The only reason I didn't give it a 10 was there were a few times where i was confused and I dont give out 10s easily.  but thie was very close to it so well done and please keep writing!! Don't deny anyone the chance to read your writing because it was a pleasure.

Added on  19 June 2017

A hugeee sorry for the time you have had to wait :(