Unbreak Me by --OneOfAKind--
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-Ellen Bloom-
She is despised by everyone at school. At least, by those who are aware of her existence. Her only refuge being the books behind which she hides and the time she spends with her best friend, Rose. She's broken from inside and the shattered pieces don't know how to mend themselves up on their own. But it was not always like this. Nope. Once upon a time, when everything wasn't messed up, she was happy and well liked by her peers.
What happened that changed Ellen's life? That broke her so much that even her tears have dried up?
-Parker Ryan-
He's the new guy in Ellen's school, Amber High. He quickly reaches the throne of the highschool hierarchy. He's chased by every girl, but he doesn't seem to care. For he seems to chase Ellen Bloom, the girl that comes with a lot of emotional baggage.
Will Ellen's life get any better? Will Parker be able to break her walls? Will she let him? Will the jealous cheerleaders stop getting in their way? Will they get their happily-ever-after?
Read to find out!
Other details:-
Ongoing
Teen fiction
Highest rating: 144 in Teen Fiction
19 parts
Rating:- 9/10
Review:-
This book sets a really good first impression, which is a great start!
Even better though, i love the story. The plot is great and the characters are great too. It just grabs your attention and you can't stop!
To improve though there is one thing: I think you should explore the emotions a bit more because sometimes it can be a little hard as a reader to connect with the characters. I think if you put more feeling and emotion into it, itll be perfect.
One other tip is to make sure you keep a regular updating system to keep your readers reading. You have a good fanbase already and if you keep going you'll go a long way!
To be honest I am really impressed and i wish this story all the successes!
Review added on 26th Feb 2017
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