Stormy's Book of Wattpad Clichés

#5- Best Cat In The Clan Ever

Type Of Book- Warrior Cat Fanfictions

Scenario-

I, Goldenstream, the best hunter, fighter, jumper, and everything else, woke up to see the sun rising through my window in my personal den. Yes, I have a personal den built for me because I saved the Clans five times, one of them being when I was a kit. Awesome, right?! Well, I stretched, and padded out my den, magically not being chosen for Dawn Patrol. I told the deputy to cancel my afternoon patrol because I was staying in my personal den until the evening, and he obliged. I sashayed back to my den and went back to sleep for a few hours.

I awoke to screams. I dashed out of my den, to see my Clan under attack. Evilstar, EvilClan's EVIL leader, who was a brown tabby with amber eyes(because that's what all the villains look like!), was trying to kill my Clan's leader, Silverstar on a VERY high cliff that just happened to be in camp. I jumped up to where they were in one bound and punched Evilstar in the face. He screeched and fell Mufasa-style off the very high cliff, where he died immediately. The EvilClan cats ran away at the sight of me, and we were victorious. Silverstar made me leader, and everyone was happy. I ruled JuniperClan for 1000000000 moons(because I'm immortal!), and then stepped down to become deputy.

Stormy: Goldenstream?

Goldenstream: It's technically Goldenstar now, and yes?

Stormy: *punches Goldenstar in the face, making her fall Mufasa-style off a random cliff* c: I saved you all from that abomination.

Edit: Now, I think that you all know what's wrong with this character. People just assume that making their characters the best thing in the world will make them more likeable, charming, and appealing to their readers. But it isn't so—it'll do quite the opposite, in fact. No one wants to read about a godly cat that can do anything that they want. They want a plot, something that they can sink their teeth into, something that they can truly enjoy.