Dudley's Birthday Surprise

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Remember it names what paragraph, and where you're supposed to end! It'll get easier as the chapters go on, it'll become almost second nature!....hopefully....this way we can't be taken down!

Now there are only THREE clips from the book, because they are CHANGED slightly, from what the book is!

"With all these interruptions, we will never get through all these books. I say that the next person to speak when they aren't reading should be removed from the Hall. Agreed? Good!" said Umbridge without looking to anyone for approval. Madame Bones sat and looked at her colleague with disgust.

“Imagine her teaching you.” muttered Susan.

“I've told you're mother that I pitied you, she doesn't understand...doesn't surprise me...she's never met the woman.” said Madam Bones. "Who would like to read?".When Madam Hooch raised her hand, she levitated the book to the flying instructor and she started.

Name of second chapter

People silently edged forward, one of every student's favorite conversation topics was accidental magic. It was always so hilarious when one talks about it. But Harry Potter's, they thought excitedly, should be amazing.

First paragraph, first five words.

"Why did it skip so many years?" said Umbridge with furrowed brows.

The entire school went silent looking at her with amazement. Fudge smacked his forehead with the palm of his hand and Percy groaned. Several of the teachers started to snicker into their hands and Madam Bones looked smug.

"What? What is so funny?" said Umbridge indignantly.

"You just said that the next person to speak, that wasn't reading, would be kicked out. No one else spoke, just you." said Kingsley with his deep calm voice, a faint smile on his face.

"I'm exempt from that rule of course. I'm the High Inquisitor." she replied with a sneer.

Down where Harry sat, a small recollection came to his thoughts. "Exempt.....do....I....want...Minister..." it was fuzzy and not very clear, so Harry let it go.

"I think it would be better to just let the students and guests voice their opinions. I will not have that sort of behavior here, Delores." said Dumbledore sternly.

First paragraph, end of first sentence.

"Surprise, surprise." said Ginny sarcastically. Mrs. Weasely sent her only daughter a scolding look. That however didn't seem to have much effect.

First paragraph, fifth sentence, first comma, eighteenth word.

Laughter rang through the Great Hall.

"Harry, you are freaking hilarious!" yelled the twins

First paragraph, fifth sentence, second comma.

"Oh yes he is!" said Ron loudly. Creating another round of laughter.

First paragraph, to the end of paragraph.

"Aren't you there anymore?" said the same first years that almost frozen in panic when Harry smiled at him at the start of school term. Harry nodded.

Second paragraph

"Why is it that you never seem to get to wake up peacefully?" asked Dean.

Dialogue line, 

Third paragraph

"I can understand now how come you don't sleep very soundly anymore." said Lupin with a concerned tone. "I wouldn't be able to sleep all through the night if I had to wait for her to come knocking." Harry, nor Lupin noticed Snape nod in agreement.

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