The Bat of the Dungeons

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"Drove me mad, I thought I was going in circles, because I kept seeing the same people time after time." said Harry thinking thoughtfully.

A few students paled in shame. They didn't know all they were doing was confusing him.

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"Did you count them Harry?" asked Neville with widened eyes.

"Ron and I kept getting late to class, so when we had free time, we would go and explore, we climbed up and down every staircase, and traveled down every corridor." said Harry simply. "Took a long time."

“Nearly wore out my shoes.” said Ron.

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"I hate that one!" said Neville bitterly.

"I fell through it a time or two." said both Harry and Ron.

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"Tricksy tricksy!" chanted Harry in an imitation of Peeves.

The students laughed and clutched at their sides.

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"Found out half a year later, that they could, it's a defensive measure. But it takes the command of a teacher to get them to move about." said Harry absently fingering his little black notebook.

McGonagall smiled to herself.

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"They are particularly fond of doing that." said Madame Bones, thinking back to her school days.

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"It's his job as House ghost." said McGonagall. "He is supposed to guide the new students in the right direction.”

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"And that's being kind." said Neville bitterly.

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"If I find out who taught him that little joke, I will give them something they'll never forget." said McGonagall threateningly. Lupin cringed guiltily in his seat. Only Harry, due to the fact that he was laying against him, took notice.

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Sirius, Lupin, Fred and George all whistled. It took all of them a week or two to get on his bad side.

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"RONALD BILIUS WEASELY! HAROLD JAMES POTTER! I FORBID YOU TO GO NEAR THAT CORRIDOR AGAIN!" screeched Mrs. Weasely.

"From now on or back in time?” said Harry calmly, raising his eyebrows. Ron was too busy trying to hide in the love seat beside Hermione.

Mrs. Weasely stuttered and stammered, Ron gathered up the courage and meekly told his mother:

"Don' t bother continuing mum. Harry won't let you win, never does when he has that tone in his voice.” said Ron. “But you can count on us not going near that dog again, from now on.”

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