First paragraph, first sentence, first comma.
"I really was, I had hoped that Filch caught you." said Malfoy quietly.
First paragraph, end of first sentence.
"You had bags under your eyes and big smiles, I was so pissed." said Malfoy smirking over to them.
"Your shocked face was what made us smile." said Harry in a cutesy voice.
The school, even Malfoy, started to laugh.
First paragraph, second sentence, first comma.
"In retrospect it was an excellent adventure, not then and there. At the time, it was an absolute nightmare!" said Ron shaking his head, Harry nodded in agreement.
First paragraph, end of second sentence.
Under the glare of the adults in the room. Ron and Harry shifted uneasily in their seats.
End of first paragraph.
"I was absolutely floored when he told me. I could hardly believe it." said Ron shaking his head again.
Dialogue line.
"Or both." said Sirius and Lupin.
Dialogue line.
Sirius kissed the top of Harry's messy head, and Lupin gave him a broad smile.
Harry smiled, this was the kind of attention he liked, attention from a family, HIS family.
Second paragraph.
"Harry must've came up with about two hundred things that would fit that size. And what it really was, was the first ruddy thing he said." said Ron looking a little irked.
"What is it?" asked a second year, quickly.
"Not telling, you'll find out when first-year Hermione does." said Ron and Harry.
Several people groaned.
Third paragraph.
"Neville's smarter than the three of us in that aspect." said Harry happily over to a grinning Neville.
Fourth paragraph, first sentence.
"Ouch, sorry about that Hermione." said Ron and Harry.
"It's alright guys." said Hermione.
"I really, REALLY don't mean to be mean, but, how in the BLOODY hell did you guys become friends. Because you lot are like enemies in this book." said Bill with widened eyes.
"WILLIAM! WATCH YOUR LANGUAGE!" admonished Mrs. Weasely.
End of fourth paragraph.
"What happened?" said Sirius, getting excitedly.
Fifth paragraph, first sentence.
"We know what that is!" cried the Gryffindor Quidditch team.
Fifth paragraph, second sentence, second comma.
My second letter and my first parcel!" said Harry, beaming broadly.
End of fifth paragraph.
Sixth paragraph.
Letter from McGonagall.
"Very lucky that you read the letter first." said Lupin hiding a laugh.
"You got a Nimbus? Who paid for that?" asked Charlie incredulously.
