The Game of Wizards and Witches

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Lionus and the Doctor took seats beside Dumbledore, who conjured up the chairs for them.

First paragraph, second sentence.

"You always could describe things beautifully" said Dr. Clark giving Harry a one armed hug.

First paragraph, fourth sentence, first comma.

"I always wondered what you were doing, Hagrid." said Percy looking thoughtful. He wasn't upset that Umbridge was now in Ranger custody, he never really liked her at all. And he was glad he wouldn't have to look at her any longer. She was a severe strain on his eyes.

End of first paragraph.

"Very fashionable, as always." sneered Pansy.

"Don't get me started again." said Harry warningly.

Pansy turned pink and scowled at him.

Second paragraph.

The Gryffindors, fifth years and up all groaned in memory of their devastating loss at the end of that year.

"Something tells me you didn't make it to the Championships." said Sirius consolingly.

"We made it to the Championships, but we didn't win." said Ron sadly.

Third paragraph, first sentence.

"Some secrets are not very well kept in this school." said Harry wisely. "And this was one of those times."

Third paragraph, second sentence, first comma.

"Um, yeah, that would be me." said Ron meekly.

"Oh, Ron! We wanted to keep Harry's playing a secret!" chided Katie.

"Sorry, I just bragged to a few people." said Ron sheepishly.

"Who then told a bunch more people." said Harry kindly.

End of third paragraph.

"The mattress one was probably the one that made me feel worse." said Harry.

"I can understand that one." said Dr. Clark and Sirius.

Fourth paragraph, second sentence, first comma.

"With all the Quidditch practice, he almost forgot to do his homework. You kept reminding him, and me for that matter." said Ron putting an arm around Hermione.

"Now I know neither of you needed it." she huffed.

"I did! I was still a nitwit then!" said Ron laughing.

End of fourth paragraph.

"I thought you would like that book." said Hermione brightly.

"After he took it back, I went and checked it out too." said Ron.

Fifth paragraph, first sentence, first semicolon.

"That is a lot of fouls, and all those happened in that one game?" asked Dr. Clark.

"From what I hear." said Sirius with a smile.

"That must have been one hell of a game." said Dr. Clark laughing quietly.

Fifth paragraph, first sentence, first comma.

"Well then you were perfect for the position." said Dr. Clark fondly.

Sirius looked on jealously as Harry smiled and leaned heavily against the Doctor.

Dr. Clark and Remus both saw the look on his face. Remus leaned over slightly and whispered in his ear "He's a little possessive of his cub." Remus had a slightly apologetic look on his face.

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