Once nine o'clock rolled around, the book opened itself and hovered in the air.
"So who's going to read?" said Ron, looking around the school.
"I would like to." said Luna a dreamy voice. The book flew over to her and landed softly in her hands.
Chapter title said Luna in her trademarked dreamlike tone.
"Oh jeez." said Harry smacking his forehead. He could live his life happier without Sirius and Lupin knowing just how close he was placed in Slytherin.
First paragraph.
"Yet, Mr. Potter..." said McGonagall calling over to Harry.
"I keep crossing you left and right." said Harry with a small smile.
“Don't feel bad, your dad used to do that all the time.” said Sirius with a smirk.
Dialogue line.
Dialogue line.
Second paragraph, second sentence.
"I never noticed, but, you're right, the Great Hall is about that size." said one of the third year Slytherins, remembering the Dursley's house.
End of second paragraph.
"Good, Potter, take in your surroundings. Very good." said Moody, nodding his head.
Third paragraph, second sentence, twenty-fourth word.
The teachers and some of the Ministry workers were impressed by this. The doors were quite thick and it was almost impossible to hear anything through those doors. But Potter heard several hundred people. He must have some very sensitive ears.
“How the hell did you hear that?” asked Sirius.
“Aunt Petunia would whisper to me what she wanted me to do when guests came around, if I didn't listen carefully and got them wrong, I'd catch hell for it.” said Harry plainly.
Sirius and the rest of the adults grumbled.
End of third paragraph.
"Aww, scared little first years are so adorable!" said Fred sweetly and clasping his hands and bringing them under his chin.
Dialogue set, second sentence, first comma.
Ron's stomach rumbled. Ginny and Hermione slowly looked over at him.
"Ron, breakfast was fifteen minutes ago." said the both of them slowly. Harry laughed.
Dialogue set, third sentence.
Several people bumped fists with their housemates and others high-fived each other.
End of dialogue set.
"I heard about this so-called free time, never got to experience any myself." said Harry with a smirk. People across the hall laughed. Neither had they.
Dialogue set, first sentence, first comma.
Gryffindors stood up and cheered
Dialogue set, first sentence, second comma.
Hufflepuffs also stood and shouted
Dialogue set, first sentence, third comma.
Ravenclaws jumped to their feet and raised their voices
Dialogue set, end of first sentence.
Slytherins bounded out of their chairs bellowed out their support.