by RICKGRMES
Carl Grimes X OC
I really really love your fan fiction. It is very descriptive, and I like how you write everyone's thoughts. I love the quotes you add in, too. I enjoy how it's not the exact, exact words from the episode, so I never know what's coming.
BAILEY IS SUCH A MOM.
I love your OC, Bailey Dixon, and I like how her and Carl are such close friends, and Daryl doesn't get 'overprotective'. You make every part of the fan fiction interesting, and I think any twd fan would love this book. CAILEY FOR LIFE.
I adore how Bailey draws.
You set up the story perfect, the prison is a nice place for the fan fiction.
Did I just call a prison a nice place?
ANYWAYS.
Your OC is goals. So is your playlist.
FANGIRL MODE:
THE CAILEY MOMENTS THOUGH.
OMG. WHEN SHE GRINS AND ROLLS HER EYES THOUGH.
#cailey.
Out of fangirl mode:
Your fan fiction is great, so descriptive it could be a book in Barnes n (and?) noble.
Carl and her belong together.
Bailey's back story is so sad.... but hey! She found Daryl. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
#cailey
**IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THIS FAN FICTION I STRONGLY SUGGEST YOU DO**
