by saltysloth5
CARL GRIMES x OC
(Negan's daughter)
Your story is flawless. There's not a wrong thing in it. You write amazing. It's good that you tell about Rosaline's past.
Rosaline is such an interesting character. I can't wait to see how her and Carl's relationship turns out. I feel bad for her, because she feels like she lost her dad, and she has. Simon should stfu.
I could tell Rosaline isn't weak though she has a soft spot.
Your writing is awesome. I love it. I appreciate how you write her thoughts on everything, or else we wouldn't know what rosaline was thinking. It would be an emotionless story without your flawless writing. Almost any twd fan would love your style of writing.
I could tell Negan cares for her, yet doesn't want to show it. I know that Negan can't get better because he's a dickhead. Like let the girl leave the room; it's like rapunzel all over again. Anyways I can't wait to see Carl and Rosaline's relationship form.
At least Carl will care for her.
Your story is excellent. Your unique and descriptive, and rose is my smol bean. The fan fiction is just really really interesting, and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!!
Fun fact: if Carl's name was coral, the ship name would be coraline.
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**IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THIS FAN FICTION, I STRONGLY STRONGLY ADVISE YOU TO**
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