by @twdtori
Carl x OC
Let me say, your fan fiction has no flaws. It's flawless.
Your writing is descriptive, explaining how your character feels and what her thoughts are. The plot is a good idea, and I feel your character sticks to a personality and isn't all over the place. I'm also informed what is happening in it because of your writing. I'm never lost or confused.
You didn't leave everyone hanging with an unfolded past, and I'm glad I know Mia's history. Her past is creative, unique, and interesting, along with her personality.
I love your story, plot, characters, and everything about this fan fiction. I highly recommend it to you twd fans.
**IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THIS FAN FICTION, I STRONGLY ADVISE YOU TO**
