carl x oc
by ChelseaxxCooksonxx
Your fan fiction was very good. I like how you put the events in order. Your OC is very unique.... I like how you change their ages because of your opinion, if you'd like to call it that. As in it's very creative. The idea is good itself and from the first chapter I knew it'd be good. This book is starting out really awesome.
It has a certain creativity that you don't naturally find. It has an interesting plot that I haven't seen before, and it's not cliché. None of the chapters are boring, they are all eventful. It's a very good fan fiction.
**IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THIS FAN FICTION, I SUGGEST YOU DO**
