by GlennTrash
carl x oc
From the first few chapters, everyone knows it's an excellent, unique story with an interesting backstory. You didn't rush anything, which I loved about this story. You made up many original characters that the walking dead fans adore. It wasn't overly descriptive, meaning not once was I bored with it. There are 9k views, and it deserves 9k votes.
Every chapter had something that made me want to continue reading. Sometimes I zone out while reading it it's so good. (For example a tv show ended, and the ending was so sad, then I read this and completely forgot about everything). This fan- fiction is fantastic. The carnie (Marine and Carl) moments make everyone scream. Everything that you do in the fan- fiction makes sense, nothing confusing or difficult to comprehend. Every time I watch twd, I look around and I'm like, WHERE DID MARNIE GO?! AND JAMIE?! AND SAM AND BEAR AND RYAN?!
Then I realize I'm dumb.
The grammar is great, paragraphs separated perfectly. It's the closest to perfect a fan fiction will ever get to. You got everyone's personalities well, and I enjoy how you add characters from your other fan fictions.
See, I have my little own world. I usually get lost in it. And your book helps me get lost the way I like to.
**IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THIS FANFICTION, I STRONGLY, STRONGLY, ADVISE YOU TO**
