Hi everyone, sorry I've taken so long with the update! I've been getting Writers block a lot, but I've now written the prologue you can check out and I've made a few grammatical corrects and made a few points more clear- thank you Manuel022 for pointing these out to me!
I appreciate all the comments aqsamustaf and corrections AriesTrifle done on my book and the review I got from DebbieHopkins!
I've made a lot of corrections in line with your review and comments and I think I'm made the book even better! Thank you!
I've left the initial reaction of Asher, but it will make sense why he's behaving like this in the later chapters! But the other changes I made are as following:
1) Amber- is now called Alannah in the novel because a lot of people were getting her confused with Amy
2) Alannah (previously known as Amber) is Amy's half sister (different fathers)
3) the point about "no- there's no point now" in 'First Encounters' chapter is more clearer.
4) Alannah's hair is now similar to her mothers blond hair rather than as previously mentioned 'our fathers'
5) In the mature content 'why did you kiss me?' chapter, I've made Amy a more willing participant in the kiss so it doesn't border on sexual assault but more like mutual consent.
Please read the novel again if you wish to do so, but if not you can just continue to read on... but you have to read the prologue and afore (in the past scenes) because it lays out the story!
Okay that's it!!
Thank you to all of you who Vote, comment and read 'Stargaze Lovers'! Love you all!
P.S.
Please let me know what you think of the name Alannah? Do you like it?
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Stargaze Lovers (Romance novel)
RomanceWhat if you were beaten up as a child? What if your entire life everyone walked all over you, except one: Asher Goodman. He saves Amy in every possible way, from holding her hand to sticking up to bullies, but what happens to Amy once Asher get adop...
