Evil Naruto (under editing)

Chapter 1 - The Start (Edited)

Hey, guys, this is a new book made by me, I've read so many of these neglect books that I wanted to make one so here it is. By the way, I'm using a kindle to write this so if you see any mistakes please tell me in the comments! Thank you
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Before sealing the Nine-Tails

"I know you're not going to like this Kushina, but I think it's time for someone else to be the Kyuubi's Jinchuuriki," Minato said while he was looking at his three newborns "why does it have to be this way?" Kushina cried out with panicked look. "Minato don't do it! I'll do it for you!" Minato looked up to see the Third Hokage already had the Shinigami looming over him the blue glow shining over everyone "please let me do this, you have a family to look after" Saratobi pleaded with a soft smile on his face Minato hesitated, "But this is my job as Hokage" he said with a stern look on his face. "My time is over, I'm old and I have a family. My wife has died and I would like to be with her" the Third replied with a sad smile. With tears in his eyes, Minato nodded "okay" was all he could say.

The Third Hokage walked towards the three silent newborns and put his hand onto the chosen one "You'll grow up to be strong" he whispered with a small smile with his face to the blond whiskered boy before darkness took over his vision. There was a very long silence until the child with the new seal mark in his stomach started to cry out in pain. "Is it over?" Kushina asked Minato, eyes looking at the screaming baby "I think so" he answered back as he slowly made his way over to his children. "Minato-sensei are you okay?!" A young grey-haired boy ran up to the both of them with fear written in his eyes "Yes Kakashi were fine but our children need to be cared first" Minato said gripping on to his wound while trying to check the new seal. Kakashi slowed walked towards the newborns, where one was crying while the others were sleeping, gently picked up the child that was crying and cradled him to his chest "His names Naruto, he's also the new Jinchuuriki of the Kyuubi" Minato said as a smile formed on his face.

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