Little Miss Teen Magazine #1

Bec's Book Reviews

Bec’s Book Reviews

Book Name: A Deal With A Demon

Author: Vodka-Toast

Rating: PG-13

Genre: Teen Fiction & Fantasy

Overall Score: 8.7

Dear Readers,

Welcome to our first edition of Little Miss Teen Magazine!

Let me introduce myself, My name is Rebecca Crawley, but you can call me Bec!

I hope you enjoy this months issues! I am looking forward to being able to get reviews on your books!

Here goes,

Okay first impressions.

The cover looks fantastic, it’s so eye catching. And that is what the reader gets attracted to. I mean, if you have a good book, but a bad cover. It is less likely that people will even try to read your book. ‘Don’t judge a book by it’s cover’ You know that quote? Well, as it says, people do actually judge a book by it’s cover.

Ok, on with the review. I started reading the first chapter, and I can already see good things.

1. Good grammar and punctuation.

2. The writer has put something in that grabs your attention.

3. It has kept the tense pretty well throughout the first paragraph.

These are the first 3 steps, to getting someone to read your story. If you have: ‘My name is is Julia I like to eat chocolate I am very short I don’t like cheese I jumped out of my hard bed with a pillow in hand.’ It is very boring and confusing for the reader. This book is actually pretty good. I have enjoyed reading it. So if you're a Fantasy Lover, I would recommend this story. Well, I hope you have enjoyed this month’s book review.

Make sure you send me a message at: @_flower or @News2Day, if you want a review done on your book!!

All the best,

Bec xxx