I'm coming out and saying it,
THIS STORY IS ON HOLD UNTIL THIS SUMMER
Please continue to read to know why, well if you care. Just do it :*
Yep, I went there. I'm sad but I think this is the best option for myself and this story right now.
This is because I'm rewriting all my chapters. I have started to write the plot out and organize my thoughts again, and I came to this conclusion.
Just because I'm putting this on hold DOES NOT mean I will stop writing this story. Hell, these next few months I will be writing like crazy to make this new version better.
Originally, last week, I said that as I rewrite my first few chapters that it wouldn't change the story but as I started with the Prologue, I noticed that I will.
I want Alarice and Sebastian to be a certain way and for that to happen, I need to start from the beginning. I need to change dialogue, thoughts, and everything.
YOU WILL LOVE THE NEW VERSION!
I can fucking guarantee that.
Alarice will be more hardcore and tough, oh my, I'm writing her character details as we speak(as I write, whatever) and I'm loving it.
Sebastian is someone I'm working on, I want to developed him better and make you love him even more.
I just, the more I figure out all these details, the more I see how I need to put this on hold and rewrite it.
This is my first story and I knew I was bound to do so many mistakes, not organizing my thoughts and this plot was my first mistake. I didn't do it well, in fact, I published this story in the middle of the night while I was in bed and listening to music.
I have come so far with this story and I only want to make this better. As I said in my previous A/N, I want to put my all in this story and bring it to where I have it in my mind.
In order for that to happen, I need to put this on hold.
This story will be
back this summer,
aiming for May or JuneI promise it will be worth it.
To my readers who read every update, I'm sorry but I'm doing this for the greater good of this story.
➵IF you want to see sneak peaks of what I'm working on, follow me on
Instagram: alexcarterd.➵Fair warning, I post sneak peaks about my other story, screenshots of stories I read on Episode, and about my life.
I don't want to put out shitty chapters or chapters that don't correlate to the new version.
It's minor details that make a difference, a difference that will elevate this story.
Lastly, thank you to brookeallyson254 for giving me your input on this, I really needed it and it helped me a lot!
That's it, I hope you can stick along with me until this summer. These few months will fly by and the newest version of my story will be out. So, if you love or enjoy this story, hold on tight until this summer will ya? :) it will be worth it, I hope.
From the weird author of this story,
❦ Alex ❦
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