Since one person didn't submit it they were eliminated, (Nate). So no one else gets eliminated this round!!! :D
Jessie : Score 8.5. I think there should be more details but there was no grammar mistakes, nor punctation. Good job. Just try to expand your vocabulary extension, but other than that, great job!
Redd: Score 8.7. I love the plot line, and there was no grammar mistakes from what I could tell. Great job!
Crystal: Score 8. I totally agree with the plot line, and how it was spread out!! I just noticed some grammar mistakes. Great job!
Fate: Score 9. Only one or two mistakes, but great vocabulary used in the paragraph, and a very jarring twist, I must say! Wonderful job!
Skye: Score 8.7. Wonderful job! The ending was very creative and not at all what I expected. I also enjoyed the use of "crimson" instead of "red". It makes it a lot clearer.
Luna: Score 9.3. Very interesting plot line. Well detailed! It was amazing ho you thought that it could of been a dream!
Skylar: Score 7.5.. I think it could of used more details about what the creature Gracie thought it was, but other than that, it was great. :)
Zoe: Score 9.2. Well done! It had a very well written plot. I loved the fact you based it from a reference.
Wicki: Score 9. I think it was amazing how you explained the monsters and how their silhouettes showed. It was very descriptive.
Lily: Score 9.1. I think it was very creative how you put that she was kidnapped!
If any of it sounded rude, I didn't mean it.
