You all did marvelous! But I'm sorry to say that Scene has been eliminated for not submitting the first assignment nor the more recent one. You all did great- and it was VERY hard to score them, so no hurt feelings? Thanks. :) Oh, and remember it's out of ten! :)
Zoe's Score- 9.8! Only one little misspelling! But don't worry- you did marvelous with your vocabulary! :) A great stretch of words put into your submission. Well done! :)
Skye's Score- 10! Perfect. It has a tint of horror, mystery, and romance. None, zip, nothing, is wrong with your spelling. It's spot on! :)
Luna's Score- 9.9! There is no misspellings, and its well written, just the idea of having another pheonix submission didn't really catch my eye.. But my only suggestion is the ending. Like, I understand that it was Pheonix from Harry Potter, and all, and how it's warm, but I would of liked it if you added in the end that either the bird DID warm her up or DIDN'T do a well enough job. But don't feel bad- I loved it! The vocabulary and how detailed it was! Perfectio!
Lily's Score- 9.7! . Romantic! I thought there could of been a little more detail, like how Jack looked like, but i love the romantic part of this. :) It was simply perf! :) Well done.
Wicki's Score- 10! 10! 10! Perfectio! I love love love it. No suggestions at all. The ending was sad, but it was good by playing the reader's emotion, which is a great strategy in writing books. :) BRAVO!!!!! :D
Tiffany's Score-9.9! Walla! The only thing keeping it from a ten is the one single misspelling. :( But other than that, I love it! The vocabulary was amazing, so was the plot line. :) well done.
Crystal's Score- 8.5 I loved the story- but the spelling, and grammar, and punctuation... a real yikes! But I LOVED LOVED LOVED the plot line. :D
Jessie's Score- 9.7 well done. :) No misspellings, so yay! :D I love Elsa and Jack Frost.. so yeah. :) Well done.
Fate's Score- 9.8! Walla. :D I loved it- just a little confusing lol. No misspellings, zip! I loved it. :)
Hey guys! I'm adding a new part of grading for the next round, I'll be grading you on Vocabulary Extention, Spelling, creativity, and best refrences (optional).Then, I'll award each person with the "best" award, like so:
The Best Vocabulary Words Award goes to Zoe!
The Best Spelling Award goes to Luna, and Lily tied!
The Best Creativity Award goes to Crystal!
The Best Refrences Award goes to Jessie!
Congrats everyone! You all did perfect, really climbed up on your submissions, I'm proud. :D
