Thoughts in the wind

Chapter 1

                 
          I lay down on the road with unconsciousness draped over me, like the quilts my grandmother used to make. I hear nothing, I see nothing. I can think things. I think I'm in pain, I think I'm in danger, and I think I might die.
     I start to hear sirens weaving in and out of my consciousness. I don't feel scared, I'm oddly calm. I can just about open my eyes.
'Almost....almost....open!!'
I look around to see that there are people all around me watching me intently. There is a handsome guy with dark hair and green eyes asking me questions.
     "Can you hear me?"
      'Yes but I can't speak'
      "Do u feel this?" he proceeded to poke me on my foot
       'Yes.' I try to say, still nothing comes out.
I twitched from the sudden poke. That showed him I still had feeling.
       He continues to search my body for injuries. As if I'm a treasure map and he's gonna find his gold.
    I move my eyes along with his actions, he picks up a pair of scissors. I start to worry, come to find out he cuts into my jeans.
    'Jerk those were my favorite jeans'
    "Rolling your eyes are we, what sass!" He flashes his smile
      'What a nice smile.' I flash a grin myself.
     "You can smile, move and you have feeling in your limbs yet you can't talk. Interesting."  He says looking at me with curiosity.
      'I wonder what your name is'
      "My names Philip by the way." He says as if he can here my thoughts.
       I smile as if to say hello.
       "You're a happy person for Someone who just got in a car accident." He says while writing something down on the clipboard.
      I start to look back in memories before the accident and realize I don't have anyone, I'm all alone. I soon become sad and find it hard to put a smile on my face. I guess I'm not that happy after all.
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