2. Cops (English Version + Rewriting) [Finished]

Orders

Jyn's lov

I reached the edge of a ladder which led straight on the platform, passing by the road would have been far too risky. I started climbing, the bars were very slippery because of the rain, but I was holding on.

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Baze's pov

Chirrut walked away from me, I didn't know what he was going to do (again). << Where are you going? >> I was sitting on the edge of the truck, the weird black dog was behind me, still lying down, I was beginning to think that this was all he could do. << I'm following Jyn, her path is clear >> << Alone? Good luck >> << I don't need luck, I have you >> This is perfectly Chirrut, always there for me to follow him in his crap, I got up from the edge to follow him (again) bringing my heavy weapon with me.

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Bodhi's pov

After leaving Captain Andor, I went back to the truck, gathered the things to go. Kaytoo was lying on the edge while waiting for his master.

I took out their belongings and urged Kaytoo to follow me. << Come on buddy >> I said. He didn't care about me, he just looked up, at least it was reassuring, he seemed to like me more than Jyn. I whistled at him, as his master often did, and he raised his head with an air of interest. He stood on his four big legs, he was definitely much bigger once standing. He disembarked from the truck to follow me by my side.

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Cassian's pov

I had Galen Erso in my viewfinder, a man in white came out of the black car, he was in a suit with a white raincoat on him.

As he spoke to him, I could shoot him, I could execute my orders as I had always done, like the way I was trained. But I refused, my finger was on the trigger, but I couldn't. Through my viewfinder, I could see a part of Jyn in Galen, the same eyes, the same look, if I killed him, it would be like killing Jyn.

I released everything, I realized that I was becoming more and more the man who had destroyed my life, this killer, this murderer. I became the one I feared all my life, at that moment I was becoming this man, I was becoming my own enemy.

I heard fires on the platform, men were on the ground, Galen was slapped by the man in white. I looked more to the right, Jyn was there, covered from them. I heard further, several cars arrive. I turned, it was five police cars, they had come to execute my orders in my place. They pulled out of their vehicles, weapons in hand << Fire !!! >> cried their captain. They fired on the platform, specifically Galen. << No !!! >> I cried, they were not listening to anything from me. When they stopped pulling on the platform, I looked into my binoculars, the man in white had left, Galen was down, Jyn also << Jyn, no >>

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Jyn's pov

I reached the platform, there was a Stormtrooper where I was. He looked at me, I took his leg and made him fall into the void. I took his gun and hid behind a box.

My father was slapped by the man in white who had killed my mother, he leaned to be at his level and talk to him << How do I know that the weapon is operational? I will give you some details. Jedha, Saw Gerrera and his band of fanatics, their holy church, gone >> he said << you'll never win >> my father replied, the same thing my mother replied before she died. The alarm was heard, intruders were there.

I went out of my hiding place to shout << Papa! >> He looked at me, he knew it was me, I looked at the man in white, pointed his gun at me. It was exactly like the day Lyra Erso died, my father, this monster and I, I was in my mother's place, it was me who was going to be killed. I raised my gun to shoot at him.

Gunshots were heard from my left, they shoot everything except my father, there was a gas can to his left, it exploded, he got propelled and me too. At that moment, there was neither sound nor image...