Revenge of the broken (sequel) major editing

Chapter 8

"Let's go boys," I say after I grabbed my money I wanted.

"Oh and Matt, next time I visit I hope you will be more cooperating" I tell him.

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Tick tock tick tock,

The clock has struck,

Now it's time to come face to face,

But this is only the start of the race.

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"Have you seen my phone?" I yell to the boys

I get a chorus of "no's"

Great. Just great. Where did I put it?

I never not have my phone on me. Where is it?

I don't have time to look for it. I need to go.

"Boys, go on and I will meet you there," I yell.

I need to find it.

I hear a knock on the door and quickly run downstairs to open it.

"Sally?"

I stand there confused as to why is she here.

"Why are you here?" I ask her."did you write those notes?"

"What notes?" she says

I go and grab on that is sitting on the bench and show her.

"No," she says "I failed English, even ask ally, oh wait that's right she's dead"

"Yeah I'm happy she's dead, it's where she belongs," I tell her "why are you here?"

"I have a new friend and I want you to meet her, she was an old friend of Alex," Sally says "she is in town for a few days."

"Do you want to hang out with me or something?" I ask

"Yeah, if you don't mind,"

"I have to go out but ill be back in an hour," I tell her "you can wait here."

"Thanks, Em come here"

"Em?"

"Her name is Emma but i call her Em," Sally informs

"Oh, I will meet her later. I need to go," I say walking out the door to my car.

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