Kira and the Strange Man

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An- ok so I know this story is crap. Bare with me here, this is my first Death note fanfic and I'm not used to writing characters like L and Grace. I'm trying ok! If you recommend I should do something comment. Also comment whatever you want! If it's funny I'll probably reply! Ok that's it continue on with is cringefest of writing.

*knock knock knock*

"Who is it?" Mrs. Hudson called through the closed door of her office.

"It's grace, I was wondering if you wanted to play chess?" I said in my usual monotone voice.

"I'm sorry dear I'm very busy today I'll play with you tomorrow," she replied.

"Is it alright if I go to the park then?" I said.

"As long as you're back by dinner time I don't care," she sighed. I'm guessing she was getting annoyed with my talking while she was busy.

"Alright see you then," I said casually and walked upstairs to get my shoes. I slipped on a pair of beaten, stained, gray toms and tucked my mild mess of hair back in a headband to keep it out of my face. I took one last look in the mirror and looked at the dark circles under my eyes from lack of sleep and unimpressive outfit, a gray sweatshirt with holes in it, and some black skinny jeans that have seen better days. I shrugged satisfied with my appearance and began my walk outside. I'm not crazy about looks it's not like I'm trying to impress anyone. I took a deep breath and pushed the orphanage door open and began walking towards the public park I've grown to love.

'How bout I practice my skills,' I thought. It's one of my favorite things to do because it keeps my attention to detail sharp.

'Tree, one trunk, 6 thick branches on the trunk, 8 sticks on each branch, 5 twigs on each stick,' I counted, 'about 5 leaves per stick that's 1 leave every 5 twigs.'

I than looked to my right at a man.

'Man middle aged, unhappily married, alcoholic, not from here, most likely Russian, owns 2 dogs and 1 cat, career most likely car mechanic,' I detected looking at all the details of him. 'Boring as usual.'

I continued the process of using my "ability" through out the 10 minute walk until I stood in front of the park entrance. I walked down the path and to my relief it was empty. I went onto the dock and sat on the edge bringing my right leg under me and placing my left leg in front of my chest. I put my chin on my knee and stared down at the water thinking. This is what I usually like to do when I'm bored and want to think. I find the park relaxing and one of the few places I really have a little bit of fun anymore.

I let my mind think about random current events. The trouble I've been having sleeping, the snooty girls that have been picking on me even though I couldn't care less, and finally my mind wondered to the Kira incident that's been going on.

'How could Kira possibly be killing all these people? It's just not right!' I thought. 'Judging from his actions I'm assuming Kira is childish and hates losing, and from the times he's been killing criminals he's a student, we already know he's in Japan.' I continued pondering as I threw a rock into the water below, watching the ripples form. 'If only I had more info I might actually be of some help to this case' I muttered to myself.

Just then I heard a car park by the gate surrounding the park and the sound of a car door opening. I looked to the left and saw a tall guy with greasy black hair hunched over standing by a very expensive looking car. He wore a white long sleeve shirt, baggy jeans, and old plain white sneakers. He had huge bags under his eyes and his skin was very pale. He defiantly didn't look like he belonged, kind of like me.

'Who the hell is this guy?' I thought.

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Ok so I didn't expect to publish this but here I am. I kinda want to continue writing this but I might not publish the chapters, it's just a me story. If you like the story and think I should continue this than comment saying so and I'll continue publishing, if not comment that i shouldn't and I won't. Please be honest so I don't embarrass myself on the Internet. If you have suggestions comment those too I LOVE suggestions. Thanks so much!

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