"who's that?" they all ask in unison. "that's my sister." "Wow she looks just like you Liam."
I couple people asked me to repost so I did. Keep in mind I wrote this originally in 2012. I was young and in my pick me phase.
Irma's POV I pull her into a hug. She pulls me closer and I feel her tears go through the soft fabric of my shirt. We stand like that for about 10 minutes when there is a knocking on the door. Rita wipes her eyes and goes to answer the door. I go with Niall and hug him close. I feel bad for her. She loves him very much just wont admit it. I hear her gasp. Then the door slams with Rita running to her room. Oh dear was that Louis? Zayn runs to Rita's room and Niall runs to the door with me right behind him. Niall gasps to see a girl with brown hair at the door smirking. What who's she? "Hey Niall." She says smugly. "What are you doing here Eleanor?" "What no hey. Niall that isnt very nice." She says sweetly. "What are you doing here?" "Nothing just thought I would stop by. By the way tell that little b**ch to stay away from Louis he's mine." I get mad at this. "Who the he** do you think that you are? Get the he** away!" She smirks and waves. "Bye for now." I slam the door in her face.
Zayn's POV I run after Rita not caring if she wants to be alone. I walk in and she is crying her eyes out and punching her pillow. I pull her in a hug and she calms down. "I cant believe him. Why would he do that?" She says still crying. "Would who do what?" I say softy. "He cheated on me with her." Louis cheated on Rita. She stays crying in my chest and I rub tiny circles in her back. "Its okay Rita. Calm down." "No its not Zayn. I think he broke me." I am slowly getting angry. I know how it feels to get cheated on. Emma cheated on me yesterday with Justin amd she didnt even drink we broke up and now she texted me in the morning saying that she was sorry. I look down at Rita, he did indeed break her. "How do you know that she is even telling the truth?" She grabbed something from her pocket and I realize that they are photos. I look at them and get disgusted with them. They show him shirtless on a bed with that slut. I cripple them into a ball and throw them in the trash. She hugs me tighter not stopping the tears. I haye seeing her cry it actually hurt me. I think it about how Louis hurt her and slowly get angrier , but i dont stop comforting her.
Louis POV I cant stop thinking about her. It is tearing me apart. I hurt her and she trusted me. She hates me now. Why else would she have yelled at me to get out. Ugh i am an idiot. I cant believe myself. Why did i do that. All i remember is drink a couple beers until Eleanor showed up. Oh shit Eleanor. I had dated her secretly a month before I had met Rita. I broke it off and she went insane saying that she would make me date her again. No no what if she goes to Rita and tells her something. I love Rita to much to just let her go. I am not gonna let her go that easily.
Two Weeks Later
Rita's POV Work is the only thing that is keeping my mind away from Louis. I am getting into a schedule. Wake up ,work, Freddy time, sleep. With eating and bathroom brakes in between. Zayn and I have been getting really close. We are bestfriends and he even has helped me with Louis. I havent talked to him since what happened but the worst part is that he moved on 2 days later. He dating the girl who he he cheated on me with, but it could be worse. He could be trashing me on television but he isnt. I have been keeping Freddy and Louis has not evn tried to come and talk to his own child. I hate how i loved him. Why did i even think for a second that he wasnt a lying dirty pig. Anyway i still have to go to work today Irma has been taking care of Freddy while i am at work since she works on an online network with some big company and doesnt need to show up unless they call her to a meeting which is rare. I dress myself and go to the door.
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I pull myself to leave which i dont want to do. All I want to do is lay amd curl up with Freddy. My little baby he is growing up i hate that he is going to grow and leave me one day. I walk to the cafe and start my shift. It is boring and annoying at the same time.
I am going around checking if the cds are in order when a bell rings. Eh i will let Josh take that. Josh started working her a week ago. After about five minutes i hear "What does it take to get some service!" I turn at his voice. No it cant be. No its just my mimd playing tricks. I go to the counter and his back is to me. He turns and his face goes from angry to shocked in milliseconds. "Rita?" "How can I take your order?" I say ignoring his question. "Umm a hot chocolate." "Okay that will be $2.36." He gives me the money and i hand him his receipt. "Rita i didnt know you worked here." O dont answer but he continues. "How Freddy?" I still dont answer and start to make his chocolate. "Come on talk to me. You said that you lived talking to me. Hows your hand?" I place the paper cup in the counter. "Here you are sir." I say. He gets angry. "JUST TALK TO ME!" "Louis go away i am okay with out you. I dont need you and please dont make a big deal out of this. Go with your girlfriend and leave me and Freddy alone cause i can assure you that we are going along just fine." He looks at me and skakes his head. "No i will never leave you and him alone." "You did for 2 weeks i dont see why you care Louis. Oh wait you dont care. You dont care that Freddy was crying for the past 2 weeks and having nightmares. You dont care about anything except for yourself." I say to him before he runs out of the store slaming the door leaving his chocolate. Tears are streaming down my face and i grab my phone dialing the person who has been there for me since this issue started. "Hello?" "Zayn get your arse here now." "Why whats qrong where are you." "Work please just come." "Okay i will see you in a bit. Bye." "Bye." I hang up and continue work wiping the tears and ignoring the burning pain in my chest.
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○●○ Hey biscuits How you guys doing? I am so sorry for not updating yesterday. What should happen to Louis and Rita. Is Zayn slowly taking Louis' spot in Rita's heart? Well i don't know yet so please give me ideas. Love you guys so much. Mwah mwah . Group hug! *hug anyone who reads the book* VOTE,COMMENT ,TRASH TALK ,AND LIVE LIFE! Yours TRULY Momma biscuit ❤❤All the love ❤❤
