River Horse

A BRIEF NOTE

Ok, so I would like to address several things here. To start, I'd like to thank all of you guys for the wonderful support that has given me the encouragement to keep on writing. I really, honestly couldn't do this without you all :D

Secondly:
I will now be updating regularly on Thursdays, I PROMISE!! I know I've been terrible about it, but I'm trying to be better ;-;

Thirdly:
I am 100% aware that the relationship between Alicia and Hans seems to have moved too fast. But this is all part of my storyline. HAVE A LITTLE FAITH IN ME (you don't know that song? DISHONOR ON YOUR COW).

Fourthly:
I am doing a rewrite! The storyline isn't significantly changed, but there were some MAJOR issues in the first few chapters, mostly concerning inconsistencies in Alicia's attitude (I'd like to thank my friend Caitlyn (sorry if I spelled that wrong) for pointing that out). I would really appreciate it if you older readers would go back and check it out :D

Fifthly:
Please, please, PRETTY PLEASE give me some constructive criticism. I'm only fifteen, so I make mistakes and I really would like to know when I do. I want to improve my writing as much as possible because I plan to be a novelist. However, I can't do that unless I receive feedback from people, so comment what you think so I can improve the story for you guys AND make myself a better writer.

Sixthly:
So a while ago, I asked if any of you would make any fanart to see what you would come up with, if any of you decided to do it :) I gave you an email that I have apparently forgotten the password to (oopsy) so please, if you make any, send it to luvmetal4ever@gmail.com
Any fanart I get will be posted in each chapter in the order that I receive them :D

There was going to be a seventhly, but I can't remember what I was going to say, so that's all! I pinky swear that I will have a chapter out by thursday, so be ready for it!!!