avneil ff:kyun main jaagoon

the story

This is my ff, hope you like it.

The lines in { } are for what Avni is thinking,[ ] for what neel is thinking black is for what author is saying or describing, ( ) for translation. - - when author is telling about avni's / neel's feeling, thoughts, and whats happening with them.

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Author's POV

Bebe asks avni "Puttar avni .. aman..amol.. ananya ye sab kya h(avni, amol, aman, ananya? Whats happening)

Shweta says "Bebe vo(Actually bebe)

Neel says "Bebe ye avni h.. Ananya nhi.(bebe she is avni not ananya).

Shweta asks "Neel tujhe pata h (neel you knows?)

Neel asks "Mom apko kaise pata (mom how to you know)

Shweta says "Riya ne bataya tha(riya told me)

Bebe says "Ye ho kya rha h, mujhe chod kar sab ko sab kuch pata hota h (whats happening, except me everyone knows everything)

Neel says "Bebe vo (actually bebe)

Avni finally speaks "Bebe me... ashish Mehta aur aisha ki beti avni ho(bebe I, am ashish Mehta and aisha's daughter, avni)

Bebe says "Tu uski beti h, us director ki jiska affair chal rha tha us actress ke saath(you are his daughter, that director's who was having an affair with an actress)

After listening to bebe, amol feels disgust about what people think of their parents and avni feels hurt.

Before bebe could say more hurtful words to avni neel says "Bebe.. avni's patents are no more.. so that she could sense the depth of situation that how hurt avni and amol are getting listening bebe's sharp words about their parents who are no more with them.

Aru says "Kya (what) and everyone too gasps.

Avni couldn't take it no more and she runs towards the bedroom side wiping her tears.

Neela says"Ha... aur avni(yes and avni)

Neel says "Me batata ho neela ma, un dono ko dayavanti Mehta ne mara h. Avni aur amol ke parents ko unki hi dadi ne maara hai. Aisha ma ko amol ke paida hote hi maar diya vo bhi unko suffocate karke, unpe pillow rhk kar. Iska sara blame avni pe daal diya, aur usse jail bhej diya. Ek 11 saal ki bachi ko jail bhej diya jab ki usne kuch nhi kiya tha, infact she had lost her mother. And uske dad ne bhi apni mom ka saath diya. Jab unhe realise hua, proof mile ke unki ma ne aisha ma ka khoon kiya h to unhone unhe expose kiya phir ketan uncle aur dayavanti Mehta ne unhe maar diya. Diksha bua ne to neela ma ke baba ko maar diya tha. Dayavanti mehta ne to avni to bhi do baar marne ki koshish ki h. Ek baar jab vo 11 saal ki thi, tab usne avni ke dil me goli maari thi, second time jab maddy bua ko vapis lana tha, mrs Mehta ne avni ko zinda jalane ki koshish ki thi but vo bach gai thi, usne avni ko bonfire ke andar chhupaya tha. Usne aisa kiya kyoki usse pata chal gaya tha ki ananya hi avni h. To agar usne apni jaan bachane kiye jhoot bola to kya galat kiya. Agar usne amol ko dundne ke liye, revenge lene ke liye jhoot bola to kya galt kiya. Mrs Mehta ne sabko khareed liya tha, aur avni ko insaaf chahiye tha. Kya galt kiya usne. Dayawanti Mehta ne amol ko neela ma se dur rkha tha. Itne saalo se amol ko nhi pata tha ki neela ma, avni h uske paas. Avni and amol recently get to know that their father is no more. Ye h unki kahani. Aur rhi bata illegitimate hone ki, to koi bhi bacha illegitimate nhi hota h.

(I will tell neela ma, dayavanti Mehta has killed them. Avni and amol's dadi has killed their parents. She killed aisha ma when amol was born by suffocating her with a pillow. And she putted all the blame on avni, and sent her jail. She sent an eleven year old girl when she hasn't done anything. Infact she has lost her mother. Her dad too supported his mom. When he realise and got proof that his own mother has killed aisha ma, then he planned to expose her; then ketan uncle and dayawanti Mehta killed him. Even diksha bua has killed neela ma's father. Dayawanti Mehta tries to kill avni twice... once when she was 11 years old. When she was young dayawanti mehta shoots avni in her heart. second time was when, we have to bring maddy bua home .. dayawanti mehta tries to burn her alive but she got saved. She had hid her under the bonfire. She did it because she got to know that ananya is avni. If she hid her identity to save her life what wrong she has done. If she lied to find amol, and seek revenge from her, then what wrong she has done. Mrs Mehta had brought everyone, avni wanted justice. What wrong has she done. Dayawanti Mehta separated amol from neela ma. For years amol didn't know that he has neela ma and avni. Avni and amol recently get to know that their father is no more. This is their story. Now the thing of being illegitimate is left, than no child is illegitimate.)