avneil ff:kyun main jaagoon

desire and convo

chapter 12

This is my ff, hope you like it.

The lines in black is for what author is saying or describing, ( ) for translation. = = for neel's pov. 

# # for avni

As requested I have done the night's pov, I am very sorry, I couldn't write the whole night in their individual pov, but I in between added their thoughts.

Requests are welcomed, give suggestion please. Thank you.

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Author's POV

****FLASHBACK****

2 night after her truth has come out in front of neel, when she has herself has told him.

Avni is in the room arranging clothes in the cupboard.

# When will neel be back from his friend's bachelor's night. It is already 1 am. I am getting worried now, hope he is fine, and come home soon. Stupid avni, why are you thinking so much about neel, you never cared about anyone this much, maybe because he is my husband, but only for few days until we avenge dayawanti Mehta, or maybe because he has became a very good friend of mine. #

She hears a knock on the door which disturbs her thoughts.

# Who will it be at this time, maybe neel, finally he is back. I am so relieved. #

She goes to open the door and finds his father in law supporting neel on his feet, while neel is looking totally drunk with a bottle in his hand

# Neel has came home drunk, I cant believe this. Tomorrow he will get a good lecture from me.#

She helps her father in law and supports neel and makes him lie on the bed.

Prakash says "take care of him", she nods in reply and then prakash goes from their room.

Avni turns and gives neel angry looks, while neel gives innocent looks.

# Uff this man, what should I do with him, here I am giving him angry looks and he is staring me. First I should get him some fresh clothes so that he can change those alcohol smelling clothes.#

= She is looking so beautifully, so dangerously hot in her silk nighty, and her angry looks are cherry on top, so cutie, words are less to describe how she is looking right now. I cant even stop looking at her. Her curves are making me crazy for her. Why don't I feel like this daily maybe because maybe I am in my control and prevent having such thoughts about her. I think I should go to her and help her or maybe take help. =

She again turns and goes toward cupboard to take out some fresh clothes for neel, meanwhile neel gets up and stumbles towards avni with the bottle still in his hand. He stands very close to avni, when avni turns she collides with him and is about to fall when he catches her by waist. Even when he is drunk he cant forget to save avni from any trouble. Neel makes her stand on her feet and walks closer to her and she takes her steps backward. Her back after few steps hits the door of her cupboard and neel pins her there.

= I cant control my feelings and actions, don't know what will happen, this alcohol is dancing on my mind, but I can bet one thing that I wont regret what will happen.=

# What is neel doing, why is he so close to me, and why am I not feeling uncomfortable when he is standing so close to me when he has pinned me here.#

Neel's breath is alcoholic but still intoxicating, and he says "you are looking ravishing"

# Does he really mean this that I am looking ravishing?#