Your character needs to life;
Aka. Shower, eat, have homework, talk to parents, charge their phone, change, go the bathroom.
Include basic things like that to give your story a more well rounded feel. Realism peeps.
But plz DONT do this;
(1st person)
I went to my closet and grabbed (list of clothes), then went to the bathroom to turn on the water. After I peeled of my dirty clothes and got in the shower. I took some body washed and cleaned my self. Then room shampoo and scrubbed at my long hair. After a while I rinsed and got out wrapping a towel around me. I dry myself then my hair before putting on my clean outfit.
I DONT CARE
Guess what everyone reading has taken a shower before....we don't need all the little details
How do characters go place to place and not have to go the bathroom??? Like I want to relate to this character. If you said you've never had to pee at an inconvenient time your lying
YOU ARE READING
How NOT to write Fandom Stories
FanfictionStop writing like that.... Just some things and stuff about fanfiction I've seen a couple of these with certain fandoms and I love those stories and have my own things to say because it's so hard finding many good stories for something. ~general t...
