Um why does Octavia have a twin?Yes it makes for a good story vv wild but I've seen it a few to many times
So it's a good story if it's well written but if not... yikes
And it would be so much harder hiding 2 kids instead of 1. Someone could have been caught earlier.
And personality, either just like Octavia or way to innocent
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Any The 100 character that is part of the 100 delinquents sent down...they are a delinquent
They won't be happy go lucky, or innocent. Maybe they are optimistic or happier than other but they aren't 8.
That character committed a crime and was locked up they will be a little bitter.
I'm not saying making them like season 3/4 Octavia but make them reasonable to the situation that they are in
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How NOT to write Fandom Stories
FanfictionStop writing like that.... Just some things and stuff about fanfiction I've seen a couple of these with certain fandoms and I love those stories and have my own things to say because it's so hard finding many good stories for something. ~general t...