For your charactersThey need details;
Likes
Dislikes
Hobbies
Interests
GoalsConsistency is also a big thing;
Let's say your character is allergic to apples a couple chapter later don't let them eat apples
If they dislike something keep it consistent and maybe give a reason why
Maybe your writing your story spaces out so you have a detail chapter 2 and now it's chapter 15 it's been a while and you mess up a detail its okay. As long as it's not a big thing or it happens a lot.
As a reader they may be finding your story later and be reading 20 chapters just like that so they will notice a change in details
YOU ARE READING
How NOT to write Fandom Stories
FanfictionStop writing like that.... Just some things and stuff about fanfiction I've seen a couple of these with certain fandoms and I love those stories and have my own things to say because it's so hard finding many good stories for something. ~general t...