Introduction

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Hi! So, you've stumbled across this book, congrats? Either way, this is where I'll review some ocs, I'll just go there some things.

I may warn you that some of the things I say are satire but they are for comedy purposes only, I still need to keep this interesting, those types of things will be in the middle of your form and such, the constructive criticism will be at the bottom of the chapter along with some ratings. There will also be a small book review at the bottom of the first few chapters too.

There will be three categories:
Originality %
Mary-Sueness %
Interest %

They will all be out of one hundred.

I'm going to give you my version of a Mary-Sue.

A Mary-Sue is a seemingly perfect character with no flaws, the world seems to bend to please them and although they have certain "weaknesses" they never end up causing them any problems or bumps in the story. They also show no evidence of character progression because they show no signs of anything that needs to be improved.

There are also certain things I didn't say in that paragraph but may take in consideration, I just wanted you to have an idea of what I consider a Mary-Sue.

The Fandoms I do are:
Undertale
Harry Potter (haven't read all of the books)
Gravity Falls
Voltron
Glee
Camp Camp
Be More Chill
Percy Jackson (read the first four books but stopped at the fifth one)
+More

If you wonder if I do another fandom I hadn't mentioned just ask.

Original OC's are also accepted.

Continue for the form and rules.

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