sos i suck at writing smut/literally anything
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Audrey quickly pushes open her front door grabbing your hand and rushing you inside. She smirked at your innocent look while she guides you up the stairs towards her bedroom. Audrey pushed you onto the bed and quickly took off your large fluffy coat. She roughly kissed your soft lips licking your bottom lip asking for entrance, you opened your mouth slightly consenting Audrey to let her in. She pulled your shirt over your head as you did the same to her. She then took off her pants and yours then pins you down onto the bed. She sucked on your sweet spot on your neck causing you to moan loudly. She rubbed you through your already soaked panties and smirked at your face. She pulled your panties off and slowly licked you up and down suddenly shoving a finger into you causing your breath to hitch and make you squeak. She pumped into you faster and faster before suddenly pulling out and brought her hand up to your face.
"I want you to know what you taste like babygirl." She smirked as you sucked on her two fingers staring at her straight in the eyes. She picked you up and brought you to the bathroom starting a bath. After getting into the warm water Audrey grabbed the shower head and turned it on. You cocked your head to the side looking confused as Audrey got closer to you. She then suddenly pried your legs open and moved the shower head directly onto you. You screamed cupping your hand over your mouth but Audrey pulled your hand away.
"Don't be quiet baby, be loud. I want to hear you moan for me. Do you love me?" Audrey asked moving the shower head closer.
"Yes! Yes Audrey I love you so much!" You gripped the side of the tub trying not to slip.
"Okay, I want you to cum for me baby. Now." Audrey said shoving the shower head closer to you making you scream Audrey's name.
I NEED HELP READ BELOW
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Ok so i was thinking, would you guys want me to continue to write this book or is it getting sucky? And yes, pls be honest. Don't worry, you won't hurt my feelings i just honestly need to know if i should continue or not.
thanks, loey xx