Chapter 1

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by Lisa_Boon

by Lisa_Boon

(I thought I'd do a commentary on 'My immortal.' My comments will be in bold. Wish me luck. Also, I don't own Harry Potter nor do I own this fic, thank God.)

Chapter 1.

AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) how can she spell special but not goth? 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!

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Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way I would say what parent names their kid that but then remember we have stars who name their kids names like Pilot Inspektor. and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) You were born with long black hair? Most babies are born bald or have a few wisps of hair. with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid Err someone correct me if I'm wrong but limpid means clear right? tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if u don't know who she is get da hell out of here!). I'm out, see ya I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. Alrighty then. I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England It's in Scotland where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth Guess she can spell goth (in case you couldn't tell) and I wear mostly black. I wear mostly black, does that mean I'm goth? NO, it's just that black goes with everything. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. I get 'Supernatural' stuff from there. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. Does Hot Topic really sell stuff like that? I just go there to get stuff from 'Supernatural' I don't really look at anything else. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow. This is Halloween, This is Halloween I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them. Well, good morning to you to sweetheart.

"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was.... Draco Malfoy!

"What's up Draco?" I asked.

"Nothing." he said shyly.

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

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AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz!

I'll be honest, No, it's not.

Done with chapter 1. Only a billion more to do.