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If you have any constructive criticism please leave a comment. Thank you for choosing to read my book. If you like what you read please comment, vote and share with friends. Hope you enjoy :D. 

I have just finished rewriting most of the story. If you have read it previously not too much has changed. I mostly tried to address feedback I had been given about too long descriptions etc. Hope you enjoy this new version. Thanks so much for the feedback, I feel like I get better with writing thanks to all your advice and comments. Thanks for all those who supported me. I tend to post a new chapter every couple of weeks. But bare with me if i'm a little late, i'm in the middle of exams. Anyway, enjoy.

(Italics are thoughts the character is thinking at that moment in time.)

Hey so sorry the update is taking so long. I've been absolutely swamped with exams etc. I finish exams in a month so please bear with me. During the summer I would be able to post almost twice as much :D Please enjoy the book. I've left some easter egg reference, some hidden, some not. Leave a comment if you spot one :D

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