Please say yes...

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Guys thank you sooooo much! Over 500+ reads! you guys are the  best

also the  idea of some of this chapter was given by  @aphmau1234678910 

ok on to the story! 

Zanes POV: 

"Ok y/n.." 

Lily starts talking to dave about the potion

y/n and victor start talking 

i sigh

Come on Zane..Just ask her its now or never...If you dont ask her now something bad might happen...Victor may ask her first.. or something else bad might happen

as im thinking i look up at y/n and Victor and victor has his hand on y/ns cheek and hes blushing

"victor what are you doing?" y/n asks confused

he doesnt answer and he starts leaning in to kiss her


GODDAMN ZANE ASK HER NOW BEFORE HE KISSES HER!

"Ahem" i say and victor stops leaning in 

y/n turns to me

y/ns pov:

I turn to zane who is blushing

"Y-y-yn c-c-can i-i a-a-ask y-you s-something?" zane stutters

wow when hes stuttering its so adorable

"sure" i respond smiling

he sits next to me on the hospital bed

"Y-y/n.. I-i-i w-w-wanted t-t-to ask you if.. y-y-you w-would b-be m-m-my g-g-g-girl f-f-friend..." zane stutters blushing a even darker red which i didnt even know was possible  

I smile and nod 

Zanes POV: 

shes probably not going to say yes.. 

i look at her and shes smiling and nodding 

"yes zane i would love to be your girlfriend.." she says smiling and blushing

victor looks sad but is trying to act happy for y/n

I hug her and the doctor walks in and says something to lily and Dave and they look happy/confused

"Whats happening?" i ask them

"Its astonishing.. Y/n would of most likely died from this.. she had alot of internal bleeding but shes healed..This isnt natural but y/n will be able to go home tonight..But all of you need to leave now she needs a bit more rest" the doctor tells us

"Ok," I say and kiss y/n on the forehead and the doctor makes us leave 



///HEY GUYSSSSSS! YOU GUYS ARE THE BEST LIKE 600+ views like thats crazy! thank you guys so much also, should i make it so like the potion kicks in that her father put on her? and if so should it have the effect like the forever potion but her eyes turn black? anyways baiii! sorry this took so long ive been writing alot for my youtube script since im making a minecraft roleplay series/




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