Grade A Lovers ( Cleaning )

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Sooo I was just looking through the comments on one of my earlier chapters and so I think I wanna clarify something

I wrote this story based off of a roleplay I did about two years ago

Two years ago I was a loooot less sophisticated in my writing than I was. Like, I wrote in the first chapter something that went quick

I understand that for someone reading it it would be like woah, someone wouldn't come clean so quick about that, But please don't keep commenting "well it would have been better if.." "well I think that this should.." and so on.

This story is still very work in progress, So I have not gone through and cleaned up chapters yet! If you have an opinion about the way the story is written or the speed of the story, direct message me. Do not post it on the story for all to see.

Thanks!