Candor or Dauntless

Tris POV

"OMG Toby your alive, squeeze my hand again!" I whisper yell. Nothing I feel nothing. God I'm so stupid it was probably my imagination, I got my hopes up for nothing. I storm out of the room and to the park across the street, I sit on a bench and cry, I cry what I've been holding in for days. I cry until I feel a tap on my shoulder and I a deep sexy voice someone says,
"Why is such a beautiful girl crying?" I look up to see a sexy guy, pretty muscular, and bright blue eyes.
"My boy-ex boyfriend tried to kill himself AND I STILL HAVE FEELINGS FOR HIM! HE'S BEEN IN A COMA FOR THREE WEEKS AND THE DOCTORS DONT THINK HE'S GONNA MAKE IT!" I manage to get out before I brake down again.
"Shhh it's okay, well no it's not okay and it's okay not to be okay, by the way I'm Jo." I feel his arms wrap around me.
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