The Legend of Leo

CHAPTER TWO: THE SECOND BEGINNING

THE SECOND PROLOGUE

CHAPTER TWO: THE SECOND BEGINNINING

[A/N: okay! So it's been a while since the first chapter of the Legend of Leo, hopefully the awesome, epic themes and messages I covered in the first chapter have had plenty of time to sink in, because oh boy is there more to come! You guys are gonna love Leo, trust me, there will come a day soon when November 1st – [andrew's note: and not Halloween apparently lmao, I warned you leo] and November 8th will be known as the Worldwide Leo Days, instead of All Saints' Day and, uh... National Aboriginal Veteran's Day, according to Wikipedia, which is always right. It's helped me out on so many essays, especially the one about reliable encyclopedia sources!]

[Andrew's Editing Note: you can guess how well he's doing in English]

[A/N: without further ado, lets read the reviews of the legend of leo! Let's start with the first one, the first ever review of The Legend of Leo! This one came from... Galaxithea! it reads: "what the heck man". HOLY SHIT GUYS, the first ever reviewer of The Legend of Leo is literally SPEECHLESS!]

[Andrew's note: that's a pretty good start imo] [Steven's note: HIS VOCAL CORDS ARE GONE!]

[A/N: I hope he's ready to never speak again, because the rest of the legend of leo is going to blow him!]

[Andrew's Editing Note: hahahahahaha]

[A/N: next review is from the wattpad version of The Legend of Leo! This one is from AwkwardlyAmpora, which reads: ":33< I like it very much!" ANOTHER AWESOME REVIEW, GUYS!!! ANDREW, STEVEN, PEOPLE REALLY LIKE THE LEGEND OF LEO!] [andrew's note: I can tell] [Steven's note: SATIM WOULD BE A FUCHSIA MUTANT BLOOD SEA-LAND-DWELLER!]

[A/N: also, everyone, go check out the legend of leo on wattpad! It's the legend of leo, by leogodzalez. The last review I have to talk about comes from ANOTHER LEO... whoaaa]

[andrew's note: shiiit, an impostor leo] [Steven's note: A FAKER LEO!]

[A/N: FAKER?!?! He's the fake Leo around here. Comparing himself to me?? HA! He's... probably decent enough to be my fake. ANYWAY! "yeah my name also happens to be leo but its not important, but its just man, i love your enthusiasm. i love how much you seem to be enjoying this, and i can see it! but if you really wanna get into writing, you gotta know when you communicate your enjoyment and when to be serious. the author's notes are... well, intrusive. they break up the story and ruin the energy, and don't really add much. at first, i thought the character "Leo" just happened to share your name, but with your author's notes, he feels more like a cheap self-insert instead of a fleshed out character. when palutena mentions the biological dad and mom, it... felt really awkward and borderline sinister. i dunno about you, but if i said something like that to my adoptive kid, they would probably be upset that you just casually mentioned their estranged parents. sometimes, you don't have to communicate exposition through dialogue; it can be through subtle actions or nuances. also, don't worry about things like, "He screamed, in a manly way-" since your character is male, we know he's probably not screaming like a girl unless you mentioned it. also, i'm doing my best to communicate everything in a positive way, but... to be honest, you're gonna get negative criticism sometimes, and that's okay! you just gotta learn to take that. but you're doing good so far! you're writing WAY more than most people ever do in their lifetime. just gotta refine your craft is all. good luck!"

[Andrew's Editing Note: hhhhhhh he copied the whole fucking thing--]

[A/N: well, thank you 4 your thoughts, other-leo! I personally believe, like, the author's notes are super helpful for, y'know, helping explain everything and totally getting some valuable insight on the characters and Andrew, steven, and I as people!]