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Nibir on reaching home declared the name that they had decided and all were very happy with all the happenings and they loved the name.. they decided to do an official naming ceremony  as soon as the Panditji tells about a mahurat...

Kabir agreed and moved towards their room he was a bit tired too... The mahurat had come to next day only so they kept the naming ceremony when there came someone and said..

Person: tum mujhe kaise bhul Gaye.. mera bhi haqq Banta hai baby pe akhir Mai.

But before he could continue further he was awarded by a punch in his face by suku..

Su: teri himmat kaise huie..

Per: himmat ki baat hi mat kar.. mera haqq Banta hai baby pe..

Ramesh: apna haqq Kahi aur Jaa kar dikhana.. Nikal Jaa yaha se..

Per: maa Aap bhi kuch nahi bolengi...

As soon as the person said this he was awarded with another slap. And the slap was awarded by none other than Vasundhara and the person was none other than Viraj..

Vasu: mat bulao muje maa Viraj.. Aap humate bete ho hi nahi sakte ho.. bhale hi humne aapko pata nahi hai par fir bhi hum soch bhi nahi sakte ke Aap itna gir sakte ho.. matlab socho to sahi ke humara beta Apne bhai Ko hi marne chala tha...

Aapko pata hai aapke aur Jojo ke beech mai difference kya hai.. humne Apne bure halato ke wajah se dono Ko parvarish nahi de paye par Jojo kabhi bhi koi bhi Insaan ka Bura karna to due soch bhi nahi sakte.. nahi ho Aap humare bete ho hi nahi sakte Aap.. chiii..  chin aayi hai muje aapko apna bacha kehne ki bhi...

Vi: maa hum Badal gaye hai.. hum apni life Mai bhi aage badho chuke hai..

Vasu: him abb Aap pe bharosa hi nahi kar sakte Viraj... Aapne sirf humara nahi apke papa ka bhi Mann dukhaya hai..

Vi: maa hum shaadi karne wale hai.. kisi aur se pyaar karte hai.. hum Ko Aap ka Aashirwad chahiye..

Vasu: hume aap se koi Lena Dena nahi hai Viraj.. Aap apni life Mai jo marzi aaye woh kijiye..

Viraj hold Vasundhara's legs asking for forgiveness.. he was actually not asking but begging.. seeing him like that Nisha was not able to bear it.. she was about to stand up when Kabir held her hand..

Kabir to Nisha..

K: tum kya karne ka soch Rahi ho..

N: Kabir please dekho to sahi.. sir Ko aisa nahi karna chahiye.. woh apni life for se start kar rahe hai.. maa Ko unko aashirwad de Dena chahiye....

K: Nisha tum yaa mai.. hum dono Mai se koi kuch nahi bolenga..

N: par..

K: nahi Nisha.. iss Baar nahi.. pichli baar Maine tumhara kaha mana that aur hum mom ke saath shift hue the.. not this time.. Mai apni iss nayi life Mai koi bhi drama nahi chahta.. abb Mai Nishka ki life Ko hurt nahi karna chahta Nishu..please meri ye baat Maan lo..

N: Kabir thik hai jaisa tumhe thik Lage waisa..

K: thanks..

N: uski koi zaroorat nahi hai..

Kabir just pulled her in a side hug and started playing with Nishka who woke up ignoring the whole world.. while on the other hand Viraj was begging but this time even Vasundhara did not want to give in.. she cannot risk her son's life who was her backbone in all the bad times in her life..

The whole Gangwal family was watching the scene Ramesh and the other cousin gang was boiling in rage but all were stopped by the other elders while Ramesh just wanted to break Viraj's bone so that he never even dare to spoil any other moment in his daughters life..

While on the other hand Viraj said..

Vi: maa aapko humari Kasam hai.. please humara vishwas kijiye ki hum Badal Gaye hai.. hum Taapsee se shadi karne Jaa rahe hai.. please...

At that moment Taapsee entered in the house..

At that moment Taapsee entered in the house

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Introducing Taapsee. Love of Viraj.. she knew whatever happened back then but then she was the one who helped Viraj to come out of trauma of betraying his own family..they became friends and fell in love.. soon they decided to start a new family.. she is an orphan but was brought up in a very family oriented values.

She entered and firstly went and touched Vasundhara's feet and then all the elders that elders were there and greated Nibir then stood in front of Vasundhara and said..

T: maa.. I hope yeh haqq to Aap Hume de hi sakte hai.. hum jaanta hai ki Aap aapne Aap bhi bhi naraz hai jo bhi hua usmai.. hum mante hai ki Viraj ki galti thi.. par uss galti ki saza bhi to Mili na unko..

Aaj dekho yaha pe woh bade papa ban Gaye hai.. aur unki neice Ko woh ek baar dekh bhi nahi sakte uske bawajood woh yaha pe khade hoke.. aapke paas se maafi maang rahe hai..

Aaj unse unka kud ka parivaar baat nahi karna chahta kya ye Bura nahi hai.. please maa unko ek Baar maaf kar dijiye.. Mai aapke saamne haath jodti hu..

Vasundhara was a bit sceptical after hearing Taapsee as she was getting emotional her one side of heart was not ready to accept him no matter what while the dominant mother side was feeling bad after hearing the sufferings that her son had to go through...

Vasu was not able to take a decision she looked at Nibir who was just ignoring the happenings in the surrounding and making Nishka only their surrounding...

While she then moved and saw Vitaa in their eyes (Viraj + Taapsee) and saw truth and guilt there.. she wanted to take Viraj in a hug and scold him to no end and patch with him... In all this dilemma she was not able to decide when a voice came..

Voice: Aap unko maaf kar saki hai.. hum kuch nahi bolnenge.. woh hai aapke bete to aapka haqq Banta hai unko aashirwad dene ka.. jo bhi decision Lena hoga woh aapko hi Lena padega..

Kaisa Laga twist...

Stay blessed stay happy ppl...

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