Lost But Was It Found?-chapter 1

8.2K 78 85
                                    

THIRD PERSON POV

Running as fast as she could Kia was inwardly cursing her alarm clock for ditching her on such an important day.The train had started and the doors could close any minute, all hope left in her was evaporating real quick and she was ready to give up when suddenly out of nowhere came a hand.

The hand which could help her on the train.

This brought in a sudden boost of energy in her which made her put all her strength towards holding on to it before the doors could close, and once she did reach it she was swiftly pulled in.

Into the train that would lead her to the most awaited thing, her yearly vacation with her three best friends Reese, Ivy and Siena.

Now that she was safely in the train she turned around to see the person who offered her the hand.

Standing in front of her was a handsome boy not much older than herself looking at her with his stunningly beautiful blue eyes. Eyes in which one could happily drown. She stopped herself just in time from shamelessly staring at him and managed to say a 'thank you" with her best smile.

She then swiftly turned around and walked away in search of her friends. Out of all the four freinds, she was neither the bravest nor the slightest extrovert , infact just the opposite of it, so before the stranger could start any conversation she picked her bags and turned around.

The moment she found her seat she found herself being bombarded with various questions inquiring about her fashionably late entry,

she calmly started answering all their questions in a robotic manner as even though she sat here weith her friends, her thoughts were far away, she could not shake the thoughts of those deep blue eyes.

If Kia thought she was the only one lost in thoughts she could never be more wrong.

Eden was the one lost in thought too.

After helping the running girl into the train, he thought he could show her some of his charms and give and early start to the vacation, but one look at her face after he helped her and he was tongue tied.

All this ever winning pick up lines left his mind and the only thought that remained was how beautiful she looked, smiling and thanking him, relief clearly showing in the pretty brown eyes.

Now, more than an hour later he could still not shake that smile and brown eyes off his mind. Surely something must be wrong with him. Thinking this was a bad omen about him losing his charms he decided to forget the incident.

He then joined his four friends Haden, Troy, Stan and Jacob.

This was their third holiday together, but being just before college it was a very important one seeing as how they would now be separated by going to different places to pursue different dreams.

Eden reached his seat and greeted his friends, explaining them why he turned up later than expected, but he did not mention anything about the girl he helped.

He still couldn’t figure out why was he so affected by her. Someting like this had never happened with him, it was usually the girls who stammered and blushed at the sight of him.

A few hours later he finally came in terms with his thoughts and decided to concentrate more on the upcoming vacation.

They all had planned one activity each which were kept a secret, and were  to be revealed at the correct time. Eden comfortably shifted his thoughts to what he had planned for the boys which would definitely blow their minds away specially Troy's and following his mates he too drifted off to a much needed sleep.

*author's note*

here is my first story, i hope you all like it..:) as suggested by many of you wonderful readers i have made certain changes in my chapters.Nothing much, i just sapaced out between paragraphs making the conversations more clear.

I thank you all from the bottom of my heart  for the respose, reads, votes and comments.:)

Also, check out the slideshow on the right side...:) (do tell me what do you think of the cast) <3

please continue to show your support..:)XOXO

right to write <3 

Lost But Was It Found?Where stories live. Discover now