Chapter 14/Fight scenes

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Keep pacing - some bits are fast others slow. 

Vary pacing. 

Don't overdo the number of fight scenes.

They have to push the plot forward. 

Make it a real. 

Checkoves gun ( pre introduce thign )

Your character must sustain damage. 

Use the setting. 

Raise the stakes ( ticking time bomb, the hero is at a disavantage) 

The bad guy should be slightly more active. 

Dialog before or after fight seen ( rarely during ) [ shows emotion ] 

Don't use repetitive words of phrases. 

Vary pacing in sentences and vary structure. 

Sensory Perception. 

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