Have you ever looked over a book you wrote some time ago and went like, Gross! I can't believe I wrote THAT ? I have-more than quite a couple times now, actually. The cringe is seriously real for some of my stories.
The Day I Died is now one of them, but I kinda like this book more than some others, and I really want to get deep in with future storytelling twists in our lovely ghost tale.
Therefore, I am going to create a rewritten version of the book. I want to make readers bury themselves into a story that entertains audiences within every word, and doesn't have any cringeworthy things people avoid constantly. Like-for example-Lily getting hit by a car, which gives readers an incorrect thought of her being a stupid, ditzy party girl with her head in her clouds. Or, a little girl begging Xander to kill her by ... THROWING HER OUT A WINDOW?! Who in their right mind would do that? Then, there's the weird "sad story" of why Maggie the elder spirit has a rivalry with her daughter.
The new version is still going to have most of the plots in this book here, but it's going to be much more interesting, having an intense prologue and new characters.
So, are you guys up for this rewritten version of The Day I Died? Please say yes; I wanna have an audience when I publish the book I'll be super happy to write!
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The Day I Died (EDITING)
FantasySo much can happen after your death ... Lily Woodland can shape shift into any animal of her choice. Hazel Jiang has the ability to turn invisible. Alexander Grace withholds the power to move objects around with his eyes. Mark Williams m...
