Tempestuous [oyelesleyyy]

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I don't really like horror books, because I'm really cowardly. But yeah. I read it and for me it isn't such a horror book. Maybe thriller? And the next thing I'd reproach is that the prologue follows the first chapter. I think that prologues should give 'backgroung information' or it can even be some part of the story, but not the first chapter. But despite this I can say that I really like it. The plot is really impressive and you can draw the reader into the story.

I read some of the comments on some chapters and I don't agree with a lot of them. They complain that Fallon is cold and heartless, but in my opinion it's really good. I mean... It makes the story a bit different and that's exactly what I like. It's not some cliche where the gilr is crying so hard that her tears are forming a stream. I like her and how you can describe her. The only little thing is that her personality is changing rapidly.

I also like Rowan and their relationship. Actually... I love all the characters and especially their names! It's so unique and creative! 

There's nothing wrong with your, grammar or spelling. That's really big positive!

I think there isn't more room for criticism, so... moving on!

I looks like you take this book really seriously and that's really good. You don't write author's notes, but you give the needed informations via message board. And it really suits me.

Cover. Your cover sure as hell can attract attention! I really like it, although I can read the title with difficulty

final summary: I can't criticize a single thing and if there's something I don't like it's something really little. The plot is perfect, the characters are perfect and the cover as well.

OVERALL RATING: 5 = Everything is so perfect!

THANK YOU FOR REQUESTING!!!

- Jasmine xx :)

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