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Lethal [reallyhood]

You maybe will think that I'm stupid or something, but when I first started to read the prologue I was like: What the hell is going on? and I had to read it once again. And then I understood and started to like it. I read and read and read... I don't know... I don't want to be rude or something, but despite the fact that the plot is really interesting I thing it it lacks something. It's not boring... Boring is too strong word, but I think it can be more lively. Maybe you could try to describe things more in depth. 

The thing that bothers me about it the most is that it's almost typical fanfiction with mysterious girl and boy who bumped into her and immediately wanted to know more about her. That is really platitude, but it has just four chapters, so maybe it will turn out to be very original. I don't really know. It's up to you how you will stand up to it.

I can't say more bacause there's isn't much things I can talk about in this story. All I wanted to tell you about the plot, I wrote in 180 words.

Your attitude to the story is really interesting. It seems like you don't believe in yourself with this story and have quite low self-esteem. You should be more confident when you write. Trust me, if you will, it can help and your writing will come out better.

The cover is really simple, but I love it  =))

final summary: How I said... I can't tell much about it, but I guess you can be better that this. The plot and idea are really very good! I just thing that you could describe thing a bit better =))

OVERALL RATING: uh... i'm really not sure... it's something between 3 and 4 so... new level!

3,5 = I really like it, but you should try and improve some little things =))

THANK YOU FOR YOUR REQUEST! xxx

- Becca