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Inseparable [thevampslaura]

I love this book. Sure I might be a bit biased, but even if I hadn't spoken to you before, I would still love it! The chapters are a good length, and you get a lot of detail and description in without being boring. Dallas is a really interesting character and her name isn't the typical name you see in fan fiction, which does make a difference to the story! Her friendship with James is good, as, once again, it's not a typical fan fiction.

The introduction of Blake was good as he is a threat to James, and you wouldn't necessarily expect it to go like that. Cam and Pixie are interesting characters, but I don't really understand their significance in the story sometimes. It's not a criticism as they may become more significant later, but I think there should be more James-Dallas and Blake-Dallas and James-Blake-Dallas scenes soon.

This, again, isn't a criticism as I know you haven't edited it yet, but just give your spelling a check before you upload. It's just a few words but I think it would make a huge difference to the ease of reading.

I also don't think you should say 'oh this is just a filler' in the A/Ns as that can lead the reader to believe you don't really care about the book and you're just uploading the chapters for the sake of it. Also, your 'filler' chapters are really good and so much longer than any of my chapters anyway!

The cover is very good and eye-catching, but I don't think you should keep changing it as when I am looking through my library I look for the old cover, not the new one.

final summary: I really enjoy reading this book and I want to see where all Dallas' relationships go! I think Dallas is a very unique character and that makes me smile. Just check over your spelling before uploading and everything will be great!

OVERALL RATING: 4/5 = this story is amazing!/everything is perfect!

- Cicely ♥