The house in the woods [oitsdeb]

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Four chapters. Four freaking chapters and I already fell in love with this book. I have the feeling that this review will be really short, because I have really nothing to reproach about it. Or... it will be really long because I will praise it so much!

One of the things that I love in this story so much is that you don't describe Leann as some skinny and absolutely perfect model with amazing body and hair. And her personality! That's something so uniqe! And I musn't forget the name! I have never known or read a book with this name. And I like it so much! And Calum! I love how you're describing him! I really have no words. Girl, you know what originality is! To be honest I haven't read something with character like this. Maybe there is something like your book, but I haven't read it and if I will find it, I'm sure that I won't like it, because you're the one who was her first and I will remain faithful to your book.

I have not found too many mistakes. Perhaps only in the last chapter, and it's just typos. But anyway, I'd recommend you to read at least twice before you publish it. Whenever you find some mistake correct it. It's not a big deal, but some of the readers can get annoyed.

I have never noticed that you repeat words or use incorrect terms. 

You're author notes are really short, but they contain necessary information that we need to know for the chapter. You don't annoy us with another long story about your week and stuff like this. That's something I really appreciate.

And I love the cover just as much as I love the story. It's simple and that's what I really like. It really fits to the story.

final summary: After reading this book I was speechless. I was really unable to talk and express my feelings. I immediately fell in love with this book and there's no turning back! Just keep writing in the way you do! :)))

OVERALL RATING: 5 = Everything is so perfect!   (Yeah... Perfection is boring, but I really don't know how to tell it in another way... i don't really like word best, so... You'll have to put up with perfection :D )

WITH BIG LOVE,

JASMINE xxx

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